Comedic Timing

[Novellus Caine]

So, I was mindlessly mining dilithium and felt like I got a perfect opportunity.  Looking for feedback on my timing and comedic value.

Messiah@arrakissun: you got the whole field noob you jujst got to ocme near me punk\ (no idea what this was even about.)

Novellus Caine@Novellus: I know what you’re thinking.  Did he fire six antiproton phaser banks or only five?  Well, to tell you the truth, in all this excitement, I kinda lost track myself.  But being this is a Mark XIV elite antiproton phaser bank, the most powerful phaser bank in the galaxy and would blow your bridge clean off, you’ve gotta ask yourself one question: “Do I feel lucky?”  Well, do ya, punk?

Keep day job?  Yes or no…

 

[Marcase]

lol, there’s always one. Noob was probably afraid you were stealing his dilithium ore.^^

We’ll name you the Fleet’s very own Dirty Harry  (because of all the mining dust of course) and book you for a few gigs on the fleet starbase.

Well played sir 🙂

P.S. where can I buy that Elite antiproton phaser bank…? 😀

"Boldly bashing Borg to bits since 2012..."

[jtuyajr]

🙂

Stompar approves this message…also, it was five, still one in the chamber…it’s a gift..now to watch more Archer.

aka Stompar

[Author]

Posts